My name is Sunny. I come from China. I have a big family. It is a happy one. There are eleven people in my family. They are my parents, my grandparents, my three aunts, my uncle, my two brothers and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school. My grandparents are farmers. They work on a farm.
My three aunts and my uncle are office workers. They work in different offices. My two brothers are drivers. They drive big buses. I am a student. I study in a high school. I am in the same school with my mother.
Kitty is in my family,too. It is the name of my cat. It is a cut cat. Its color is black and white. I often play with it on Sundays.
I like hamburgers. My parents and my grandparents like Jiaozi very much. My brothers and my cat like fish a lot. My three aunts and my uncle like chicken a lot. But I don’t like it at all.
I love my big family!
师评:小作者比较详细地介绍了自己的幸福大家庭各个成员的工作及工作场所。简单介绍了家人的饮食习惯。对于所学课本英语知识,具有较强的英语语言表达和运用能力。朱晴同学,你很棒,为你点赞。